Revisions are going well, with notes, comments, tweaks and whatnot keyed in through Chapter 4, including a total rewrite of the scene where M talks to the cops for the first time. I think the layering is tighter and the reasoning behind M's issues a bit clearer.
So far so good. I'll be tweaking the introduction of the love interest (and, with luck, the dog) tonight.
Btw, caffeine helps. Mood's much better with the application of a Diet Coke. ;)
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Happy to hear you're in a better place. {{hugs}}
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